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Mark Milne's avatar

I’m writing to speak specifically to the problem of reader comprehension, and to a lesser extent listener comprehension, surrounding topics of importance and high visibility such as for example climate change, war and genocide, and politics in general where controversy lurks around every corner and emotions are often very high. The sources of public information today are no longer limited to newspapers, radio and television, but of course are joined by massive digital sources with an enormously varied reach from a handful of consumers to tens of millions and more. The level of sophistication in the source communication, the writers, podcasters, journalists, television shows, etc., is also quite varied.

Our educational systems have evolved toward producing worker bees, rather than people who are well educated. That this statement is arguably mildly controversial serves more to prove the point in my view than being a sign of any real controversy. The piece you have written here, beginning from the point where you leave the anecdotes about your time teaching in France, is written at a level of sophistication that goes far above the comprehension of a very large percentage of the adult population, thanks to our poor education systems. This level of sophistication is certainly generally above that found in the popular written press, but even those sources will often speak above the heads of many readers. The likelihood that such high-level sources are pursued by those who cannot comprehend the material, across platforms, is probably not very high; people will generally seek out sources that fit their aptitude. But that does not really solve the problem, in my view, as one thing that is common to all platforms and all levels, is the use of argumentation or persuasive speech.

On the level of simple arguments alone, for one important example, one can express simple arguments in a complex way, or in a much simpler way. But when the reader or listener has not learned what an argument is, from a technical perspective, and does not understand the difference between good and poor arguments, or between valid and invalid arguments, sound and unsound, to use technical terminology not clearly understood (or even known at all) by the bulk of adults, even simply crafted material can result in a chaos of misunderstanding. Admittedly, emotions running high are a devilish contributor to the problem, but even when we remove the emotional energy (obviously easier said than done) the intellectual problem remains.

When an untrained but confident person walks in to a boxing gym or a martial arts dojo and challenges very experienced members, outside of the certainly possible but generally improbable scenario of an untrained but nevertheless very effective fighter, those who actually have learned their skills well can demonstrate their superiority to the challenger in a way that leaves no room for doubt. When you get knocked on your butt over and over, you will get the point. Unfortunately, verbal arguments are another case altogether. The defeated opponent can keep coming back forever. They might unravel us, but words don’t knock us down. People observing this may continue siding with the defeated speaker, completely oblivious to reality. Unless they possess both the necessary aptitude (and the courage to admit defeat) people involved in or exposed to heated discussions may never actually see the light. In fact, as has been demonstrated on YouTube countless times, the audience backing the inferior speaker may create an atmosphere that makes it appear as if the better speaker, the one who is right, has actually been bested.

This is all to remind us that we have a very serious problem here. Having the right information and having better arguments is absolutely no guarantee whatsoever that one can bring the minds of the population around to see what is right and what is wrong. And this says absolutely nothing of a related but very different problem of those who do understand what’s right and wrong making the conscious decision to be in the wrong for personal gain.

Folksy influencers like Charlie Kirk probably always have some element of truth in their messages, which speak to both real and imagined concerns of those who follow them. And these elements of truth help to mask the falsehoods that emerge in the final package. When an audience is unused to examining and recognizing subtlety in thought and expression, they can be made to march to the beat of just about any drum one can imagine. History proves that.

There are two problems that need addressing here. One is to improve our educational systems, which however will likely require the wholesale replacement of our social and economic systems that are responsible for and are profiting from the status quo. Is the other to ask all people who really care about truth to modify their speech and written messages to address the reality of the wider audience until such educational improvements take place?

Leaf Seligman's avatar

Like last week's piece, which inspired me to spend an hour crafting a comment, this piece is so thoughtful and necessary. Rachel, I deeply appreciate how hard you think, feel, and work to invite your readers to think, feel, and work with as much passion, curiosity, and willingness to reckon with the both/and.

I taught in universities and colleges for 27 years, and I used to say, "You can say whatever you want in class AND if what you say lands painfully on anyone else, you need to listen and acknowledge the impact of your words, not simply your intent."

Re: the criminal legal system, at least in the US, there is no justice. There is retribution. Kudos to the limited attempts at restorative justice that center on the needs of those harmed, the healing of all parties, and mitigating the underlying causes and conditions that foment harm.

Yes, there are consequences, and while we can demand accountability, that is an inner process. In my experience teaching and accompanying college students and incarcerated folks and everyone in between, the willingness to be accountable requires the belief that no matter what I have done, I will not be exiled from the human community. Assured belonging allows for accountability, though it doesn't guarantee it. It is only in an uncondemned state that any of us can change. If a person is exiled, what incentive exists to amend one's behavior?

Of course, it infuriates me that those with great power believe they are above consequence and behave accordingly, while the rest of us face the consequences of their authoritarianism daily. It is of no solace that the mighty will eventually face the consequences of planetary destruction. It is an existential sorrow that those with great power can act so brutally and wantonly.

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